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'Pressed Puddles' (thanks to Alan re title)
« Thread Started on Mar 7, 2009, 6:29am »		[Quote]
Wet leaves
stuck to the soles
of his feet,
have now left
watermarks
across her heart.
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Re: 'Pressing Puddles'
« Reply #1 on Mar 18, 2009, 2:35am »		[Quote]
Dear Sahara,

Interesting, cuz it can be read both ways, as a good, or bad, thing !

Could the title be "pressED Puddles" ? Either way, what a clever analogy !

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« Reply #2 on Mar 18, 2009, 11:14am »		[Quote]
Yes thanks you, Mister Alan 'Pressed Puddles' I like very much. I will go change accordingly......*runs off*
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« Reply #3 on Mar 18, 2009, 4:38pm »		[Quote]
not soles of the feet? I love the use of watermarks here....I can picture her heart now, like watermarked paper...his indelible faint print all over it.
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« Reply #4 on Mar 21, 2009, 4:55pm »		[Quote]
I have changed. Yesssssssss I can see much better. More gentle, softer around the edges instead of having that image of a bottom poking through! Thanks so RT.
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« Reply #5 on Mar 22, 2009, 7:31pm »		[Quote]
LOL @ bottom poking through ...tooo funnnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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« Reply #6 on Mar 24, 2009, 5:17am »		[Quote]
Ha ha ha! Well I made you laugh!
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