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Compromise
« Thread Started on Dec 26, 2008, 1:24pm »		[Quote]
A poet's pragmatism
Can be dangerous to words
For from their best opinions
Speak the lips that have them scourged;
When form is disregarded
For the sake of making rhymes
These minstrels write new verses
Compromising meter for the sake of adding more adjectives in a poem that already has far too many lines.
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« Reply #1 on Dec 26, 2008, 7:57pm »		[Quote]
and a brilliant example of same!!! well done!!
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« Reply #2 on Mar 2, 2009, 1:37pm »		[Quote]
And I am one of them! Shame on me. Great Poem, you.
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Re: Compromise
« Reply #3 on Mar 3, 2009, 6:42pm »		[Quote]
Now this is a poem that really speaks to me! (Ask Dawn... ::)) ;D

Nice one cul. 8-)
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« Reply #4 on Mar 4, 2009, 4:23am »		[Quote]
lmao....yeah and although it speaks to him, he will go on doing his thang!
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