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Re: Only In My Dreams « Reply #1 on Dec 20, 2008, 11:18am »
This is very tender, Swampy....I like the way the last lines remind us, as they seem to remind you, that it's not real but still important when u are sleeping.
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Re: Only In My Dreams « Reply #2 on Dec 22, 2008, 1:55am »
I can empathize with this piece, I've written about a very similar thing, except I pray that the person not disappear when I wake up...you seem content with seeing them in a dream. I love the romantic tone, you managed to make the poem itself 'dreamy'. And what I mean by that is it awakens a sort of warm longing in my heart when i read the piece. Well done friend!
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